Discussion (7) ¬

1. 
   Dungeonbrownies

   April 5, 2010 at 7:15 am | # | Reply

   (Delete this after you’re done with it, please. I don’t want to sound messed up because I really love this comic, but I see some “you’re” and “your” misuse. Ive turned in major projects with that issue before, I know how easy it is when you look at it again and again to overlook tiny mistakes. thanks)

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     Benita Story

     April 5, 2010 at 7:34 am | # | Reply

     No need to delete this, Dungeonbrownies! I encourage readers to correct me when I goof up! I’ll get this fixed and re-posted. Thanks!

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       Scott Story

       April 5, 2010 at 7:53 am | # | Reply

       Fixed!
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     Scott Story

     April 5, 2010 at 7:56 am | # | Reply

     If anyone sees any other spelling/grammar/usage issues, let me know!
2. 
   Rob

   April 5, 2010 at 8:49 am | # | Reply

   Gee, I think the Tailor actually likes Greg. On the other hand, let’s hope the big guy never breaks down and smiles— his face would look strange with a big crack running across it. (Wait, did he smile when talking about working for Underhall? Must go check.)

   One of my favorite things about you guys is how you deal with our doubtlessly annoying criticisms. (That being said, please don’t tempt me like this—I’m a horrible, horrible grammar geek who’s trying to get better. Not specifically here—everywhere. If people ever figure out how to get pitchforks and torches through the intertubes, I’m doomed.)

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     Scott Story

     April 5, 2010 at 2:18 pm | # | Reply

     It’s hard to imagine the Tailor smiling. Frightening, really.

     To be honest, I think the criticisms are good for the comic, helping me back edit it as I go. We get so close to it that we often can’t see spelling errors or storytelling flubs.
3. 
   Narsinon

   April 7, 2010 at 10:47 pm | # | Reply

   I love the underground city, just the idea of it is great and how it has been sort of re built and everything makes me want to see much more of it .